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#3
by burtenshaw - opened

hey Jeff

handy space. i gave it a read and thought this might help folk landing for the first time.

there's a missing character or image in the heading:

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I think you could improve the subtitles because most people with a focus (i.e. security, finance) will want to jump to their area. This might just consist of dropping 'Advanced':

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The EMU overview could benefit from being a grid that shows role rights. i.e. rows for rights and columns for roles with ✅ in the relevant cell.

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In general, I think you could pull in some slides from one of your lush deck to break up the text and help the reader. i.e.

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I hope this is useful but take with a pinch of salt, just my outside perspective.

Thx so much for the feedback! Made some changes and fixes per your suggestions.

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