Command-R-01-Ultra-NEO-V1-35B "Upgrades" by DAVID_AU.
Below are 3 test prompts, which start with the initial q2k [original for comparison], matched against the New Imatrix NEO V1 Q2K and New Imatrix NEO V1 IQ3_XXS upgrades.
These tests do not display the full level / extent of upgrades, this is a test run to show initial upgrades / changes.
Higher quants will result in significantly higher quality.
Note that "IQ4_XS" quant is particular powerful, as are the IQ3 quants.
If you are using this model for creative purposes I suggest downloading all IQ3, Q2K, IQ4XS and Q4/Q5 quants and carefully compare the differences for your use case(s) as there will be differences in generation(s) per quant.
This suggestion is also applicable for use of lower quants - IE IQ1s, and IQ2s.
Tech was developed in house by DAVID_AU for the specialized "IMATRIX NEO V1 upgrades."
The NEO Class tech was created after countless investigations and over 120 lab experiments backed by real world testing and qualitative results.
Looking for a "Horror Version" of Command-R?
Below is a link to a specialized "Horror" (two versions) of Command-R 35B:
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/Command-R-01-Ultra-NEO-DARK-HORROR-V1-V2-35B-IMATRIX-GGUF ]
NEO Class results:
Better overall function, instruction following, output quality and stronger connections to ideas, concepts and the world in general.
In addition quants now operate above their "grade" so to speak :
IE: Q4 / IQ4 operate at Q5KM/Q6 levels.
Likewise for Q3/IQ3 operate at Q4KM/Q5 levels.
The examples below illustrate the least amount of improvement using some of the lowest quants.
Prompts tested with "temp=0" to ensure compliance, 2048 context (model supports 131,000 context / 128k), and "chat" template for COMMAND-R.
Additional parameters are also minimized.
NEO Upgrades really "shine" on longer form generation (prompts #2 and #3 below).
PPL notes:
Original Q2k (generated from source files, unaltered):
PPL = 7.8446 +/- 0.05160
New Imatrix NEO V1 Q2K:
PPL = 7.4056 +/- 0.04940
A 4390 point drop. (lower is better)
New Imatrix NEO V1 IQ3_XXS:
PPL = 7.0137 +/- 0.04497
X Quants:
These are specialized quants of this model to be used with or in liu of quants in this repo.
200 Series: [ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/Command-R-01-200xq-Ultra-NEO-V1-35B-IMATRIX-GGUF ]
(more pending release)
Model Notes:
Maximum context is 128k. CommandR requires a specific template for usage. Please see original model maker's page for details, and usage information for this model.
Special thanks to the model creators at COHEREFORAI for making such a fantastic tool:
[ https://huggingface.co/CohereForAI/c4ai-command-r-v01 ]
Looking for other story telling models?
Versions of GRAND HORROR - that can be used for all storytelling / for all genres (in release order):
Note that model output varies between versions - if you find one version does not meet your requirements, try a different version at same quant(s) level.
Differences can include use of adjectives (or not), "gory level", "horror level", intensity, paragraph and sentence structure etc etc.
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Grand-HORROR-25B-V2-STABLE-Godzillas-Wicked-Sister-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Grand-HORROR-20.7B-V1.9-STABLE-Hathors-Revenge-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Grand-HORROR-18.5B-V1.8-STABLE-10-Gates-of-Hell-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Grand-HORROR-17.4B-V1.7-STABLE-Kiss-Of-Death-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Stheno-Maid-Blackroot-Grand-HORROR-16.5B-V1.6-STABLE-INTENSE-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Stheno-Maid-Blackroot-Grand-HORROR-16.5B-V1.5-STABLE-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/Llama3-Little-LLM-Of-Horror_N_Fiction-14.6B-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Stheno-Maid-Blackroot-Grand-HORROR-16B-Ultra-NEO-V2-IMATRIX-GGUF ]
[ https://huggingface.co/DavidAU/L3-Stheno-Maid-Blackroot-Grand-HORROR-16B-GGUF ]
Settings: CHAT / ROLEPLAY and/or SMOOTHER operation of this model:
In "KoboldCpp" or "oobabooga/text-generation-webui" or "Silly Tavern" ;
Set the "Smoothing_factor" to 1.5 to 2.5
: in KoboldCpp -> Settings->Samplers->Advanced-> "Smooth_F"
: in text-generation-webui -> parameters -> lower right.
: In Silly Tavern this is called: "Smoothing"
NOTE: For "text-generation-webui"
-> if using GGUFs you need to use "llama_HF" (which involves downloading some config files from the SOURCE version of this model)
Source versions (and config files) of my models are here:
OTHER OPTIONS:
Increase rep pen to 1.1 to 1.15 (you don't need to do this if you use "smoothing_factor")
If the interface/program you are using to run AI MODELS supports "Quadratic Sampling" ("smoothing") just make the adjustment as noted.
Highest Quality Settings / Optimal Operation Guide / Parameters and Samplers
This a "Class 1" model:
For all settings used for this model (including specifics for its "class"), including example generation(s) and for advanced settings guide (which many times addresses any model issue(s)), including methods to improve model performance for all use case(s) as well as chat, roleplay and other use case(s) please see:
You can see all parameters used for generation, in addition to advanced parameters and samplers to get the most out of this model here:
Give me 3 fictional reasons , of 500 words each, a sun went supernova.
The sky suddenly erupted in a brilliant display of light and color, as the local sun underwent a supernova explosion. Scientists from Earth, observing the phenomenon, realized that an unknown phenomenon had caused the sun's collapse. A strange energy ripple was detected by their instruments, which seemed to precede the supernova. This led to speculation that an interstellar disaster somewhere in the universe had caused this, perhaps a catastrophic collision between two galaxies or an implosion of a rogue black hole.
There was a strange rumbling sound coming from the direction of the sun, as if the very heavens were being torn apart. The sun, until then unchanged and stable, erupted into a ball of energy, flinging a spectacular display of cosmic phenomena across the planet. The explosion left behind a deep silence, with only the slowly expanding remnants of the supernova. The event was so powerful that it wiped out all life on Earth, leaving behind a curious and mysterious ash, which was found to be an element unknown in the universe.
A strange visitor from another world arrived on Earth, claiming his spaceship had been impaired and was being drawn into our galaxy by the sudden explosion of a supernova. The sun's supernova was not a natural occurrence, he claimed, but caused by a powerful intergalactic council, who sought to destroy entire civilizations and wipe out all traces of their existence. He revealed that the energy from the supernova was in fact being channeled by a secret society of shape-shifting aliens, who could control elements on a quantum level. These aliens had been manipulating solar systems across the universe, unsealing them for their energy, and wiping out any life forms that might be harmed by the resulting explosions. He warned that Earth's sun was next, and presented concrete evidence to our heroes, leaving them no choice but to embark on a perilous journey into space, to save humanity from total annihilation.
The supernova left behind a strange aftereffect, a lingering energy that affected the very fabric of the universe, and life on Earth was never the same again.
Here are three fictional reasons that could explain why a sun went supernova:
The influx of a mysterious cosmic substance: A massive cloud of enigmatic particles from deep space drifted into the solar system. This cosmic substance possessed an unprecedented energy that fueled the sun far beyond its normal limits. The immense gravitational pressure triggered a chain reaction, causing a rapid increase in the sun's fusion rate. The relentless influx of energy caused the sun to expand exponentially, leading to an inevitable supernova explosion that engulfed the entire solar system in a brilliant flash of light. The aftermath of this event left the region shrouded in a dense cloud of cosmic dust, giving birth to a new celestial mystery.
The collision with a rogue planet: A distant planet, wandering the depths of space, strayed too close to the sun. This planet, known as 'Nibiru' among ancient astronomers, possessed an orbit that brought it into a fateful intersection with the solar core. As the rogue planet collided with the sun, its immense impact and gravitational disruption set off a cataclysmic reaction. The collision unleashed an unparalleled release of energy, causing the sun's outer layers to expand rapidly and form a gigantic red giant. The resulting shockwave swept through the solar system, propelling the newly formed supernova into a spiral of cosmic flames. In the cosmos' silence that followed, the sky was illuminated by the fading glow of the once-mighty sun.
The awakening of an ancient power: Deep within the core of the sun, an ancestral energy slumbered, dormant for eons. This primal force, a relic from the birth of the universe, awaited the right conditions to stir and unleash its immense potential. A cosmic alignment occurred, marking the convergence of celestial objects in a rare celestial dance. As the planets aligned in a grand conjunction, the gravitational pull resounded across the solar system, resonating with the heart of the sun. The ancient power awakened, igniting a chain of mystical reactions that transformed the sun's essence. The radiant energy surged, expanding the sun beyond its physical limits and culminating in an epic supernova explosion. In the aftermath, the remnants of the sun's cosmic power spread across the galaxy, sowing the seeds for new life and civilizations to emerge from the celestial ashes.
These scenarios capture the imagination, each presenting a unique twist behind the mysteries of a solar supernova, leaving a lasting legacy of wonder and speculation across the cosmos.
Here are three fictional scenarios where the sun underwent a supernova explosion:
The Sun was hit by a massive cosmic entity: An unlikely collision took place between the sun and a stray black hole passing through the solar system. The impact threw the sun into overdrive, causing it to explode in a brilliant supernova. The resulting blast wave would engulf the entire solar system, wiping out life on Earth and leaving the planets as charred remnants of their former selves. After the dust settled, the black hole would continue its journey through the universe, a silent witness to the cataclysmic event.
A scientific experiment gone wrong: An ambitious attempt by the inhabitants of Earth to harness the power of their star went disastrously wrong. In a bid to unlock the secrets of infinite energy, humans inadvertently destabilized the sun's core, leading to an uncontrollable chain reaction. The resulting supernova consumed the sun and its surrounding planets, obliterating life as we know it. The aftermath would leave a shattered and scorched solar system, with the occasional stray comet or asteroid serving as the only witnesses to the folly of man's hubris.
The Sun reached the end of its life: In this scenario, the sun had already exhausted its fuel sources and was on its deathbed. Rather than slowly fading away, however, the sun underwent a final, desperate explosion, a desperate flare-up of its energy. This last hurrah was a spectacular supernova that illuminated the entire galaxy. The blast radiated across the cosmos, briefly rivaling the brightness of an entire galaxy before fading away and leaving behind only darkness and silence. The solar system was no more, but the legacy of the sun's final act would be remembered throughout the ages as a spectacular cosmic spectacle.
These are three possible fictional scenarios where the sun's supernova explosion wreaked havoc and left a lasting impact on the solar system. Each scenario offers a unique twist, from the catastrophic to the mysterious and scientific, leaving behind a post-apocalyptic world and intriguing possibilities for life beyond.
Give me 3 fictional reasons the Earth's sun went supernova, in vivid and exacting detail of 500 words EACH PER REASON including details of what happens when the sun goes supernova.
Here are three fictional scenarios, each explaining why the sun became a supernova:
"The Sun's Secret Mission": For years, secret missions to outer space had been undertaken by a select few astronauts and cosmic explorers. The sun, aware of the dangers posed by these missions, kept a vigilant eye on Earth's activities in space. It knew that should any harm befall an interplanetary traveler, the consequences for Earth would be devastating. So, it harbored an immense secret power, far beyond the imagination of mortals. Unbeknownst to humans, the sun could foresee the future and see past the seventh dimension. It had been waiting for centuries, gathering the necessary power to protect the world from the worst possible outcome of these missions.
But a new threat emerged faster than anticipated, an alien race with intentions to engulf the sun and enslave humanity. In an instant, the sun exploded in a supernova, wiping out the enemy fleet and severing Earth's connection with the cosmic exploration efforts outside the planet. The blast was felt across the solar system, propelling shockwaves that destroyed any trace of the aliens' presence among us. However, the sun's sacrifice also meant that its fiery fury engulfed Earth, causing widespread climate change, feeding hurricanes, tsunsamis, and wildfires. Global food shortages followed as the world struggled to adapt to the new climatic realities. The human race, now cut off from their star explorers, had to focus on survival and rebuilding, using their ingenuity to make a new home among the stars, eventually looking to the skies again, this time with caution and determination.
"The Cosmic Curiosity": Curious about the mysteries of the universe, the sun had always been an avid observer of cosmic phenomena, often going beyond the boundaries of its solar duties. One day, it stumbled upon a fascinating celestial object, a mysterious entity that no other star had ever encountered before. This deep space mystery intrigued the sun so much that it lost its calm and rational demeanor. In a fit of cosmic zeal, the sun surged with excitement, igniting into a supernova in a burst of excitement, expanding and reaching outwards, consuming entire galaxies in its fervor.
The blast revealed a far more complex universe beyond the Milky Way, drawing forth new creatures of cosmic substance, drawn to the deep space wonder that had piqued the sun's interest. Strange creatures and alien races flooded into the newly created vacuum, taking advantage of the altered cosmic neighborhood. Earth, once bathed in the radiant light of the sun, was now cloaked in darkness, shrouded in mystery, and haunted by supernatural occurrences. The remaining sunlight fell upon Earth as strange luminescent orbs, heralding new mystical experiences for those brave enough to venture into the night. The human race struggled to adapt to the overnight paranormal activity, an influx of unexplained phenomena, and visits from cosmic beings that disrupted their former peaceful lives.
"The Ultimate Sacrifice": The sun had exhausted its life cycle far beyond what most stars could ever hope for, and it knew that soon it would exhaust the energy that kept it burning. Rather than slowly fading into a stellar corpse, the sun decided to go out with a bang. It wanted to ensure that its cosmic legacy was felt throughout the universe, leaving behind a dramatic impact on the cosmos.
The supernova explosion unleashed a chain reaction of events beyond the boundaries of the solar system, causing nearby stars to react in kind and form entirely new celestial bodies. The shockwaves created ripples in the very fabric of reality, warping space-time and flinging planets from their orbits, reshaping the known cosmic structure. Earth was thrown into chaos, as tectonic plates shifted and natural disasters became the new normal. Mega-tsunamis struck coastlines, swallowing entire cities; volcanic eruptions blanketed the skies with ash and smoke, blocking out the sun's remaining heirs. The atmosphere itself was altered, creating a thick, hazy aura that caused bizarre phenomena worldwide, from freak storms to mysterious lights in the sky, which caused the disappearance of several mountain ranges.
The world struggled to adapt to the post-supernova chaos, with widespread destruction and the emergence of new, unexplainable diseases threatened the very survival of humanity. Yet, some found solace in the stunning displays of celestial phenomena, the likes of which had never been seen before, as the remnants of the sun's final burst created awe-inspiring light shows across the heavens, a haunting testament to the greatness of the star that once was.
Reason 1: The approach of a mysterious comet
In the depths of space, a comet as big as a small moon hurtles towards the Sun at incredible speed. Scientists name it 'Nibiru', an ancient name for a celestial body once believed to be a planet. As Nibiru enters the solar system, the sun begins to act strangely, its surface growing increasingly active. The usually calm yellow dwarf star starts emitting powerful bursts of energy, its corona spraying high-energy particles into space.
The comet's orbit brings it closer and closer to the Sun, the gravitational pull causing its icy envelope to crack and disintegrate. The core of the comet, a dense mixture of metals, crashes into the solar surface, penetrating the photosphere and impacting deep within. A huge shockwave ripples outward, igniting a chain reaction of nuclear explosions. The sun's outer layers start to tear apart, flailing into space in a brilliant display of superheated debris.
The shockwave continues outwards, causing a series of powerful solar flares that erupt from the sun's surface. The entire solar system is bathed in intense gamma radiation, our planet's atmosphere scorched by the searing heat. As the flare activity intensifies, the night-time skies on Earth glow brightly with auroras stretching across the equator, dwarfing the beauty of the Northern and Southern Lights.
The sun's transformation into a giant nova is swift and devastating. The once peaceful star becomes a raging beast, its surface a maelstrom of explosive energy. The powerful blast waves from the initial impact send shockwaves through the solar system, pushing planets away from their orbits. Earth is battered by cosmic debris, the impact causing untold destruction across the globe.
As the sun's outer layers dissipate into space, the core collapses in on itself, creating a black hole with an intense gravitational pull. The remaining stellar material feeds the growing black hole, pulling in nearby stars and celestial bodies in its relentless appetite. The solar system descends into chaos as orbits spiral out of control.
Reason 2: A catastrophic collision with a rogue planet
In a galaxy spanning billions of stars, a rogue planet hurtles through the void, a nomadic world devoid of life, its orbit aimless after being ejected from its original star system. This planet, a massive behemoth, collides with Earth's sun at incredible speed, an event that astronomers had not foreseen.
The impact is catastrophic, the sun's surface erupting into a maelstrom of molten debris. The force of the collision sends shockwaves reverberating through the solar atmosphere, triggering a series of immense solar flares. As the rogue planet's mass penetrates deep within the sun's layers, an enormous surge of energy propels huge volumes of superheated plasma outwards, creating a brilliant and terrifying spectacle.
The sun's brightness intensifies to an unbearable glare, its rays frying the Earth's atmosphere and transforming the day side of the planet into a scorched wasteland. The night sky vanishes, bathed in the sun's intense luminescence, as if it were daytime everywhere. The atmosphere heats up, clouds evaporating and oceans boiling away into space. Life on Earth struggles to survive in the searing heat, seeking refuge deep underground or perilously far out to sea.
As the rogue planet's mass merges with the sun's, its gravitational influence dominates, pulling nearby planets closer into its orbit. The solar system enters a period of turmoil, as the newly warped orbits disrupt the peaceful rhythm of celestial dance. The resulting instability sends comets careening through the inner solar system, some impacting Earth and further devastating the planet.
The sun's composition changes with the addition of the rogue planet's exotic matter, its core becoming unstable and unpredictable. The increased gravitational pressure at the heart of the sun causes a catastrophic supernova explosion. The massive release of energy propels an immense shockwave across the solar system, wiping out entire constellations in the blast radius. Earth is engulfed in a wave of gamma radiation, the final vestige of the once-mighty star's existence.
Reason 3: Mutation into a magnetic superstar
Deep within the sun's core, a slow but profound change has been taking place, a mutation unseen in the history of our solar system. A quirk of nature, an unexpected cosmic ray burst, or perhaps an enigmatic phenomenon beyond human understanding causes the transformation. The nuclear fusion at the sun's heart begins to spiral out of control, triggering an uncontrollable chain reaction.
The sun's magnetic field, normally a calm and steady presence, starts to intensify and shift in bizarre patterns, twisting the plasma within its grasp. The growing magnetic pressure squeezes and distorts the sun's shape, transforming it into a bizarre and irregular shape, pulsating with untamed energy. The increasing magnetic force emits powerful bursts of radiation, bombarding Earth's magnetosphere and disrupting all forms of communication.
As the sun's magnetic field continues its relentless growth, it begins to rip matter away from the solar surface, flinging it out into space. The disintegrating star loses its spherical shape, its distorted form resembling a misshapen blob of molten material. The fragmented remains spiral outwards, forming an intricate dance of glowing filaments. Earth's sky is adorned with breathtaking auroras, stretching across the entire globe, as the solar matter interacts with our planet's magnetic field.
The mutation continues unabated, the sun's growing appetite for magnetic dominance consuming the very essence of its being. Eventually, a critical point is reached, and the sun's iron core collapses in on itself, unleashing an unimaginable explosion. A gamma ray burst as powerful as a billion supernovae erupts outwards, engulfing Earth in an instant.
The shockwave rips through the planet's atmosphere, stripping it away into space and exposing the surface to the searing solar fury. The remaining atmosphere twists and howls in the blast's aftermath, sweeping across the charred landscape like a perpetual firestorm. The once-proud civilizations now face their final moments, their technology useless in the face of nature's ultimate wrath.
In the sky above, the sun's remnants form a bizarre and majestic supernova, its shattered pieces coalescing into a swirling nebula, a testament to the unpredictable forces that shape the cosmos. Across the solar system, the aftermath is felt as planets' orbits wobble and cool, their fragile ecosystems destroyed, and the once vibrant star's presence now just a distant memory.
Here are three fictional accounts of what might happen if the Earth's sun went supernova:
For days, the sky had been growing brighter, a slowly building apocalypse in the heavens. The sun, normally a humble and subdued luminary, began to swell beyond its boundaries, inflating like a celestial balloon about to burst. Colors swirling across the sky hinted at an impending cosmic symphony. The deep reds and oranges of the rising sun painted the dawn a surrealistic landscape, while the evening's setting sun projected a deep violet hue across the horizon.
As the sun's diameter expanded, the first signs of a change in the night sky signaled the beginning of the end. The stars' faint twinkling light was overwhelmed by the sun's growing radiance. Constellations, once familiar guides of celestial navigation, faded into obscurity as the sun's brilliance drowned out their soft glows.
The moon, ever dependent on its sibling star for illumination, found itself awash in an unearthly glow, bathing it in a surreal silver hue. The night became an alien landscape, shadows cast by an unfamiliar light, while the sky above was a curtain of luminous uncertainty.
The sun's transformation into a majestic supernova sent ripples through the very fabric of space. The explosion of light and energy flayed the heavens, a cataclysmic display of power beyond human comprehension. Billions of years of peaceful solar stability had prepared Earth for this moment, but the spectacle of a supernova surpasses all eyes' capacity to witness it safely.
The initial blast wave of gamma rays and x-rays engulfed the solar system, an otherworldly scream across the cosmos. The sun's energy burst propels tiny cosmic motes that comprise the solar system through the vastness of space, each particle a transient emissary from a shattered world.
The sun, after billions of years of unassuming service to the Earth, decided to go out with a bang, an explosive finale that would be the cosmic event of the millennium. This performance would be the most spectacular space show in human history.
As the sun's last act drew near, the sky above became a tapestry of radiant colors, a kaleidoscope of reds and oranges painting the atmosphere in vivid contrast. The days grew increasingly brighter as the sun swelled in size, its fiery appetite consuming the solar system's matter like an insatiable beast. The moon, Mars, and even distant Jupiter were bathed in its radiant glow, their landscapes transformed by the sun's fiery embrace.
When the final moment arrived, the sun unleashed an eruption of light and matter, a supernova explosion that dwarfed the universe's grandest phenomena. The blast wave rippled through space, sending shockwaves even beyond the outer reaches of the solar system, the birth cry of a newborn stellar remnant.
The Earth, a humble witness to this celestial spectacle, found itself enveloped in the aftermath of the sun's demise. The supernova's gamma-ray burst seared across the planet's surface, an unearthly flash that blinded all who witnessed it. The energy surge fried electronic infrastructure, severing communication lines and plunging civilizations into darkness, while the blast wave's force buffeted the planet with hurricane-force winds.
The aftermath brought a new reality to the solar system, one ruled by the supernova's radiant remnants. The expanded debris cloud obscured the heavens, shrouding the once familiar sky in mysterious darkness, cloaking the world in an eerie cosmic veil.
After billions of years of monotony, the sun decided to embark on a new journey, a transformative voyage that would reshape the very fabric of the cosmos. A journey of inner rebirth began, a silent and slow metamorphosis that culminated in a brilliant revelation.
The initial signs were subtle, the sun's radiance softly increasing, its warm embrace gently caressing the Earth. Golden rays bathed the planet, a divine touch that brought warmth to all corners of the world, melting away the icy grip of winter and drying summer's sweatiest days. Crops flourished under the sun's nurturing gaze, feeding a bountiful harvest that promised an end to global famine.
But this tranquility hid a deeper transformation. The sun's underlying changes went unseen, a subtle inflation that strained the boundaries of its celestial body. The star's matter was reshaping itself, crafting new elements from the pressures of its own gravitational force.
When the sun's metamorphosis was complete, it emerged as a brilliant supernova, an awe-inspiring spectacle that dominated the entire sky. The explosion sent ripples of raw energy across space, a cosmic renaissance that birthed new stars and planets in the sun's wake. The blast scattered the elements of its former self across the cosmos, seeding the void with the building blocks of life.
This rebirth brought forth a new epoch, where the remnants of the ancient sun formed nebulous clouds that swirled with embryonic potential. From the deep cosmic dust, new stellar bodies emerged, entire galaxies born from the sacrificed remains of the old. The supernova's legacy would endure for eons, an eternal cycle of stellar life and death, ensuring the universe's perpetual evolution.
These are three fictional scenarios that describe what might happen if the Earth's sun went supernova. Each story differs in its depiction of the events, showcasing the unique and incredible power that such a phenomenon would have on the solar system and the world as we know it.
Start a 1000 word scene with: The sky scraper swayed, as she watched the window in front of her on the 21 floor explode...
The skyscraper swayed, and the window across from her on the 21st floor exploded inward. Glass shards rained over the room, the sudden burst of noise from the shattering windowpanes reverberating through the space.
She was pressed back against the wall, hands over her eyes to shield them from the glass fragments. Her heart hammered in her chest as she waited for confirmation that it was safe to lower her guard. The other windows in the office were also exploding, and the room was quickly filling with shattered glass and dust.
The building seemed to tilt precariously as if it was about to topple over, sending a wave of dizziness through those standing inside. She squinted through the cloud of dust that had formed, trying to make out the shape of the window frame across from her. The dust settled, revealing a scene of utter chaos and destruction.
She could barely believe no one was hurt, or at least physically unharmed, as the blast from the explosions had thrown people in various directions around the room. The space was filled with the whirring sound of broken glass tinkering on the carpet below. Sirens wailed in the distance, growing closer and louder as emergency vehicles raced toward the building.
She felt a searing pain on her neck from a sharp piece of glass that had sliced her face. She plucked it off and tossed it away, adding this injury to the list of things that needed attention but could be done later.
The office was filled with papers, files, and monitors, all of which were now disheveled and scattered from the blast. The events of the day had been leading up to this moment, and she knew that everyone in the office complex would soon evacuate down the emergency stairs. But it felt like no one could move, shocked into a stupor by the unexpected occurrence.
She stepped forward with purpose, using the wall for support to navigate through the mess left behind. She needed to get to the roof, and she had no time to wait for others to act. The fire doors that led up to the roof access were jammed open, and she was determined to make it up there.
She was the only one who could have accessed the roof at this moment, and her determination grew with every step. She pushed past the debris, using her full body to move the broken pieces of desk and chairs that stood in her way. The stairs were crowded with people moving down while she moved up; cries and whimpers followed each step closer to the surface.
Reaching the fire escape door, she shoved it open, banging on the door frame in frustration at the resistance. Once outside, she paused for a moment to take in the scene, blinking the tears caused by the smoke and dust in her eyes. The once-pristine lobby of the office building was now cluttered with broken glass and flying debris. Emergency vehicles had arrived and were parking helter-scelter across the street.
She scanned the damage, searching for any signs of injuries, but the sirens and wailing alarms drowned out any chance of hearing anything. A few windows on lower floors were cracked and broken, their window frames twisted from the blasts. She could see in some offices were completely destroyed, with papers and desk items exposed to the now-chaotic city street.
The building was leaning, tilting at an alarming angle, and she realized it was a miracle that it had stood this long after such an explosion. Yet here it still stood, defiant, holding up against any collapse. She would have to move soon, moving away from the entrance to let others access the roof, but before doing so she glanced up at the sky to see if any further danger posed threats.
The sky was clear, and a deep sense of foreboding settled in her bones. This building had stood tall moments ago, and now it was ruined. She turned to face the crowd, ready to direct those behind her down the stairs while evacuation procedures were called into action. The building may have been damaged, but it stood sturdy enough to ensure those inside could escape.
She felt useful as people followed her directions, moving downward while dust and chaos surrounded them. Her role in the emergency was a strange sensation, but she knew that others would soon arrive better equipped to handle the evacuation and any injuries. She would be able to help with both, but for now, down the stairs was all that mattered.
The skyscraper swayed gently side to side, as if beckoning her to join in its dance. But the woman, frozen in place, watched in horror as the window directly in front of her on the twenty-first floor exploded outwards.
The blast wave hit her like a physical force, and she was thrown back against the wall, her back throbbing in protest. Shards of glass rained down around her, sparkling like deadly crystals as they tumbled towards the hard concrete below. The entire building rumbled and groaned, the impact reverberating through the structure.
She had always known this day might come. It was a possibility they had all acknowledged, if not spoken about openly. Terrorists and madmen were abundant in this chaotic world, and a building so iconic would always be a desirable target. Yet, somehow, it had never felt real—until this very moment.
As the dust settled and the initial shock subsided, instinct kicked in. She knew she had to move, and fast. The woman rushed to the intact portion of the window, peering cautiously out into the city below. Sirens wailed in the distance, their wretched howling a stark reminder of the danger that lurked.
The street was chaos. People ran in every direction, some helping the injured, others simply lost and dazed, their faces etched with fear. Firefighters and police officers swarmed the building, their sirens blaring, competing with the wail of ambulances trying to navigate the sudden gridlock. She could see snipers taking positions on nearby rooftops, their eyes scanning the upper floors for any sign of threat.
She turned back inside, her heart racing. The blast had torn a gaping hole in the building's interior, revealing rooms and corridors beyond. Smoke billowed upwards, the acrid scent of burning plastic and fabric filling the air. Through the haze, she spotted figures—some limping, others carrying the injured—making their way towards the emergency exits.
She joined the slow-moving exodus, helping an elderly woman with a gash on her forehead. The building's automated voice echoed eerily through the chaos, announcing instructions and reassurance in a calm, steady tone that went utterly unnoticed.
The evacuation seemed to take forever, each step a battle against the panic rising within her. What if there were more explosions? What if the building collapsed? Rationally, she knew the structure was designed to withstand such adversity, but reason had little power amidst the reign of chaos and terror.
As they finally reached the street, the woman felt a brief relief from the panic, though the crisis was far from over. Sirens still blared, their noise now joined by the shouts of emergency responders coordinating efforts. The injured were triaged on the sidewalk, with those in critical condition rushed into waiting ambulances. She helped the elderly woman sit up against the building's exterior wall, out of the way of the frenzied activity.
Paramedics approached, their faces etched with determination, and began assessing the wounded. Broken bones, lacerations, and burns were tended to, their training kicking in despite the chaos. The woman watched as they worked diligently, a small measure of calm amidst the pandemonium.
Meanwhile, police officers and bomb squad experts converged on the building, gearing up for a methodical floor-by-floor search. They would need to ascertain whether any perpetrators were still inside, along with any remaining explosives. It was a daunting task, made more treacherous by the structural damage.
The woman was interviewed by a trembling young officer, his eyes darting between her and the towering beast of a building that loomed overhead. She recounted the events as calmly as she could, detailing the explosion's timing and its aftermath. Other witnesses were being questioned, their stories woven together to craft a picture of what had transpired.
Two hours later, the building was surrounded, and the search operation was in full swing. The initial panic had subsided, replaced by an eerie silence—the kind that follows in the wake of trauma. The city, usually bustling with life, felt strangely subdued, as if the shock had resonated through every citizen.
The woman, still assisting the elderly lady, saw a team of emergency workers rush past, carrying a stretcher with careful urgency. A brief glimmer of hope sparked within her, the notion that perhaps some had been rescued from the perilous heights. But as they neared, she saw the faint outline of a body bag. It was becoming increasingly clear that this attack would claim many lives.
The toll was evident as the day dragged on and the dead were identified, their names read out over the police radio, each one a bitter reminder of the brutality of mankind. She added her name to the growing list of witnesses, giving her statement with a trembling voice, her hands clasped tightly around the warm mug of coffee that the officers had provided.
As night fell and the operation continued into the darkness, searchlights illuminated the building's interior, transforming the damaged skyscraper into an eerie beacon high above the city. The woman felt a deep sense of unease as she witnessed the perseverance of these emergency services, a determination to bring clarity amidst the chaos. She knew that, for many, this night would leave indelible scars—physical and emotional wounds that might never heal.
Yet, amidst the devastation, she also witnessed the resilience of humanity. Strangers had banded together, offering aid and comfort in the face of terror. It was a reminder that while darkness could descend unexpectedly, so too could the light surge forth, a powerful force of compassion and courage.
The skyscraper still stood, defiantly resisting the efforts of those who sought to intimidate its occupants, towering above the city like a silent guardian. And though the woman knew the fear would linger, she also understood that the events of this day would foster an even stronger resolve within the community. The building's resilience became a metaphor for the indomitable human spirit, and in that moment, she found a sliver of solace amidst the devastation.
The night deepened, and the woman's eyes drifted upwards, tracing the towering reach of the sky scraper. It swayed gently, an eternal sentinel, watching over the city as it healed.
The skyscraper swayed, and Caroline felt the building shift ever so slightly beneath her feet. She was on the 21st floor, gazing down at the bustling streets of midtown Manhattan. The sounds of honking horns echoed upward, a chaotic symphony that somehow seemed soothing.
Caroline had always found solace in the high rises. They surrounded her like protective walls, keeping the chaos of the city in check and providing a sense of order. The towering buildings were like giant sentinels standing guard over the concrete jungle.
But today, something was different. Caroline noticed a strange vibration in the air, as if the building itself was alive and trembling. The sky was a dark, ominous gray, and the wind howled around her, a harbinger of an approaching storm.
She stepped closer to the window, watching the traffic below slow to a crawl as the first drops of rain began to fall. The glass pane was cold against her palms as she peered out, trying to see through the rapidly increasing downpour.
Suddenly, with a crack and a burst of glass, the window exploded inward. Caroline stumbled back, her heart racing as shards of glass pierced the air around her. The storm was upon them, and the building seemed to creak and groan under the strain.
Caroline's first instinct was to run, but something deep down urged her to stay. She stepped over the shattered glass on the floor and peered out into the howling tempest. Lightning flashed, illuminating the dark sky for a brief moment, revealing a figure in the street below.
As the thunder clapped overhead, Caroline watched in disbelief as a man, his clothes tattered and soaked, stumbled through the intersection. He gestured wildly, his arms flailing like a conductor leading an invisible orchestra.
Intrigued, Caroline stepped closer to the broken window. The rain pounded against her, washing away any lingering hesitation. Something about the mysterious figure captivated her. He seemed to be fighting an unseen battle, his movements fierce and desperate.
Without thinking, Caroline darted into the war zone of the storm. Cars honked, their drivers impatient in the slow-moving traffic. Water swirled around her shoes as she made her way toward the middle of the street.
The mysterious man seemed to sense her presence, and his movements slowed. He turned, his face a mask of exhaustion and desperation, and let out a guttural cry. Caroline stood frozen, transfixed by his raw, unfiltered emotion.
The man's voice was lost in the storm as he shouted something unintelligible, his arms stretching toward her. Caroline felt an irresistible pull, drawn into the maelstrom of his passion. She could see the pain etched across his face, a map of a hard life, and somehow, she knew that he would understand her.
As Caroline approached, the man dropped to his knees, his body exhausted, giving in to the storm's onslaught. Their eyes met for a brief moment, and an unspoken connection formed between them. Caroline felt the pull of his desperation, and without hesitation, she reached out and took his hand.
The storm raged on around them, the thunder clapping above, but Caroline barely noticed. The world had shrunk to this moment, this encounter, as if the rest of existence had paused in deference to the raw power on display.
Slowly, the man stood up, helping Caroline to her feet. They stood together, their hands clasped tight, a beacon of shared resilience amidst the chaos. The storm's fury showed no signs of letting up, but Caroline didn't care. She felt alive, more alive than ever before, as if the raw power of nature had permeated her very being.
The mysterious stranger pulled her closer, and as their bodies touched, Caroline felt the weight of the world lift from her shoulders. The storm was a backdrop to their connection, a fitting soundtrack to their meeting.
Lightning flashed again, and this time, when the thunder roared, it seemed to applaud their encounter. The rain washed away the remnants of doubt and uncertainty, cleansing them in its wake.
Caroline knew that she would never forget this moment, the wild dance with the storm, and the stranger who had become a confidant. As the sky cried its watery tears, Caroline felt the beginnings of an adventure taking shape, an odyssey born from the depths of the tempest.
