prasanthyss/dpop_submitted_train · Datasets at Hugging Face

###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: The more effectively students are educated, the more productivity and responsible citizens we have. ###RESPONSE:

The more effectively students are educated, the more productive and responsible the citizens we have.

The more effectively students are educated, the more productive and responsible citizens we have.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In the long run, we are still maintaining our level of elderly care thought a different way. ###RESPONSE:

In the long run, we are still maintaining our level of elderly care in a different way.

In the long run, we are still maintaining our level of elderly care thought it is different from what we had before.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: It is a challenging task for the government to persuade people to agree over such adjustment. ###RESPONSE:

It is a challenging task for the government to persuade people to agree on such an adjustment.

It is a challenging task for the government to persuade people to agree over such an adjustment.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The aging problems have not arise until recently, where those who were born during the baby boom period are turning 50 to 60 years old. ###RESPONSE:

Aging problems did not arise until recently when those who were born during the baby boom period are turning 50 to 60 years old.

The aging problems have not arisen until recently, when those who were born during the baby boom period are now turning 50 to 60 years old.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: I believe that spending on the education is one of the more important areas where public money should be spent on. ###RESPONSE:

I believe that education is one of the more important areas where public money should be spent on.

I believe that spending on education is one of the most important areas where public money should be used to.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: In fact, a good education is the only way out of the rat race, to a better and secured future. ###RESPONSE:

In fact, a good education is the only way out of the rat race to a better and secure future.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Another area that Singapore should also spend more money on developing is the economy. ###RESPONSE:

Another area that Singapore should also spend more money on is in developing the economy.

Another area that Singapore should also spend more money on developing is the economy.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: It is where the country's wealth can continue to grow when the economy is stable. ###RESPONSE:

It is when the country's wealth can continue to grow that the economy is stable.

It is where the country's wealth can continue to grow as the economy remains stable.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: This will improve the standard of living for Singaporean and will eventually contribute to better healthcare system in Singapore. ###RESPONSE:

This will improve the standard of living for Singaporeans and will eventually contribute to a better healthcare system in Singapore.

This will improve the standard of living for Singaporeans, and it will ultimately contribute to a better healthcare system in Singapore.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: With that, the sliver industry will becomes lucrative market and more companies will be willing to invest time and money into developing innovative products for the elderly. ###RESPONSE:

With that, the sliver industry will become a lucrative market, and more companies will be willing to invest time and money into developing innovative products for the elderly.

With that, the sliver industry will become a lucrative market and more companies will be willing to invest their time and money into developing innovative products for the elderly.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: In conclusion, by spending more on both economy and education, we will be able to decrease effects of the aging problem. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, by spending more on both the economy and education, we will be able to decrease the effects of the aging problem.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development. ###RESPONSE:

Public spending on the aged should be limited so that money can be diverted to other areas of a country's development.

Public spending on the aged should be limited, so that money can be diverted to other areas of the country's development.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: As more often than not, education can help one out of poverty. ###RESPONSE:

Indeed, more often than not, education can help one out of poverty.

As more often than not, education can help one out of poverty.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: One primary concern for providing healthcare for the aged is the cost. ###RESPONSE:

One primary concern in providing healthcare for the aged is the cost.

One primary concern for providing healthcare to the aged is the cost.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Although some might argue that increasing the fund just targets at providing for the aged, by looking at the bigger picture, the improved healthcare system provides for all. ###RESPONSE:

Although some might argue that increasing healthcare funding just targets providing for the aged, by looking at the bigger picture, one will see that the improved healthcare system provides for all.

Although some might argue that increasing the funds just targets at providing for the aged, by looking at the bigger picture, the improved healthcare system provides for all.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: It is well known that depression is more destructive than any sickness the aged will have, having a fit mind is essential for having a fit body. ###RESPONSE:

It is well known that depression is more destructive than any sickness the aged will have, so having a fit mind is essential for having a fit body.

It is well known that depression is more destructive than any sickness of the aged will have; having a fit mind is essential for having a fit body.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: The revised funding also will not only include in-patient hospice care, but also to home hospice care. ###RESPONSE:

The revised funding will also not only include in-patient hospice care but also cover home hospice care.

The revised funding also will not only include in-patient hospice care, but also to home hospice care.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: But despite the revision of spending in this area, they must thread the issue with care as there are doubts over the sustainability over the provision of this free service. ###RESPONSE:

But despite the revision of spending in this area, the government must thread the issue with care as there are doubts over the sustainability of the provision of this free service.

But despite the revision of spending in this area, they must thread the issue with care as there are doubts about the sustainability of the provision of this free service.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Interestingly, aid for the aged in their psycho-social needs is still lacking. ###RESPONSE:

Interestingly, aid for the aged for their psycho-social needs is still lacking.

Surprisingly, aid for the aged in their psycho-social needs is still lacking.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, it is noted that capping of public spending to the aged will provide more cash flow to other sectors, which will in turn reduce and tackle the problems faced now. ###RESPONSE:

In conclusion, it is noted that capping public spending for the aged will provide more cash flow to other sectors, which will, in turn, reduce and tackle the problems faced now.

In conclusion, it is noted that capping public spending on the aged will provide more cash flow to other sectors, which will in turn reduce and tackle the problems faced now.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Ultimately, prevention is still better than cure, we need to solve the problem from its root. ###RESPONSE:

Ultimately, prevention is still better than cure, so we need to solve the problem from its root.

Ultimately, prevention is still better than cure; we need to solve the problem at its root.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: It is a well-known fact that the society is growing old and old. ###RESPONSE:

It is a well-known fact that the global society is growing old and old.

It is a well-known fact that society is growing old, and it has become old.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Because of that, it is important to make a policy that will be able to support the elderly in their late life. ###RESPONSE:

Because of this, it is important to make a policy that will be able to support the elderly in their later life.

Because of that, it is important to make a policy that will be able to support the elderly in their late life.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: First of all, if we limit the public spending on the elderly, the first one to suffer is the younger generation who have to take care of their parents. ###RESPONSE:

Nevertheless, if we limit the public spending on the elderly, the first one to suffer is the younger generation who have to take care of their parents.

First of all, if we limit public spending on the elderly, the first one to suffer will be the younger generation who has to take care of their parents.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: However, by diverting the money in the education area, we can provide the youngsters with the education that will help them in their later life. ###RESPONSE:

However, by diverting the money into the area of education, we can provide the young with an education that will help them in their later life.

However, by diverting the money from the education sector, we can provide the youngsters with an education that will help them in their later life.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Furthermore, the elderly people, who are unable to continue earning and have little support from the younger, seem to have many financial difficulties and become a burden to the society. ###RESPONSE:

Furthermore, the elderly people, who are unable to continue earning and have little support from the young, seem to have many financial difficulties and have become a burden to society.

Furthermore, the elderly people, who are unable to earn enough money and have little support from their younger counterparts, seem to be suffering financially.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: These strategies' view is that if people are given more opportunities to work, they can be able to save enough money for their retirement. ###RESPONSE:

These strategies' point is that if people are given more opportunities to work, they may be able to save enough money for their retirement.

These strategies' views are that if people have more opportunities to work, they can be able to save enough money for their retirement.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: It required some basic financial knowledge which is difficult for the normal worker to know. ###RESPONSE:

It requires some basic financial knowledge which is difficult for the normal worker to know.

It requires some basic financial knowledge, which is difficult for the normal worker to understand.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: In general, aging population is a global problem and need to be solved as soon as possible but we have to consider the solutions carefully. ###RESPONSE:

In general, the aging population is a global problem and needs to be solved as soon as possible, but we have to consider the solutions carefully.

In general, an aging population is a global problem and needs to be solved as soon as possible, but we have to consider the solutions carefully.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The ability to fight against germs and viruses gets much less effective. ###RESPONSE:

The ability to fight against germs and viruses becomes much less effective.

The ability to fight against germs and viruses is getting very little effective.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Diseases, such as tuberculosis, which were deemed incurable in the past, can be easily treated by current level of medical procedures. ###RESPONSE:

Diseases, such as tuberculosis, which were deemed incurable in the past, can now be easily treated by the level of medical procedures.

Diseases, such as tuberculosis, which were deemed incurable in the past, can now be easily treated with current levels of medical procedures.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Hence, research and development in medical science helped to ease aging process. ###RESPONSE:

Hence, research and development in medical science have helped to ease the aging process.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: This significantly decreases the amount of entertainment an elderly person can have. ###RESPONSE:

This significantly decreases the amount of entertainment an elderly person can enjoy.

This significantly reduces the amount of entertainment an elderly person can have.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Some elderly people can hardly walk up or down any stairs, ramps are paved out, hand railings are erected in parks to assist them walk around. ###RESPONSE:

Some elderly people can hardly walk up or down any stairs. Thus, ramps are paved out, and hand railings are erected in parks to assist them to in walking around.

Some elderly people cannot easily walk up or down any stairs; ramps are paved out, and hand rails are installed on the parkway to assist them walk around.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: As aging population can be a big problem to many countries, several social policies are put in place to ensure the old having enough money after retirement. ###RESPONSE:

As an aging population can be a big problem in many countries, several social policies are put in place to ensure the old have enough money after retirement.

As an aging population can be a big problem for many countries, several social policies are put into place to ensure that the elderly have enough money after retirement.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: All the money deposited into CPF account will be invested by the government and in return, offer a 3% of annual compound interested to CPF contributors. ###RESPONSE:

All the money deposited into the CPF account will be invested by the government and, in return, offer a 3% annual compound interest to CPF contributors.

All the money deposited into the CPF account will be invested by the government and in return, offer a 3% interest on annual interest-free interest to CPF contributors.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: The lifestyles of elderly people are maintained with the effect of CPF schemes. ###RESPONSE:

The lifestyles of elderly people are maintained with the help of CPF schemes.

The lifestyles of elderly people are maintained with the effect of CPF schemes.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: Therefore, aging process is eased by current social policies. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, the aging process is eased by current social policies.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The research and development of medical science, improvements of social infrastructure and social policies have helped in ensuring good health of the elderly, building facilities to create convenience for the elderly and establishing CPF schemes to make sure elderly have sufficient money for their retirements. ###RESPONSE:

The research and development of medical science, improvements in social infrastructure, and social policies have helped in ensuring good health among the elderly, building facilities to create convenience for them, and establishing CPF schemes to make sure the elderly have sufficient money for their retirement.

The research and development of medical science, improvements in social infrastructure, and social policies have helped in ensuring good health of the elderly, creating convenient facilities for the elderly, and establishing CPF schemes to ensure that elderly have enough money for their retirement.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: During aging process, the elderly will face financial problems and be abandoned by their children. ###RESPONSE:

During the aging process, the elderly will face financial problems and may be abandoned by their children.

During the aging process, the elderly will face financial problems and are abandoned by their children.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Although this problem is unlikely to be solved in the short run, many ways were carried out to ease the aging process, particularly in social policy and science research. ###RESPONSE:

Although this problem is unlikely to be solved in the short run, many ways have been carried out to ease the aging process, particularly in social policy and scientific research.

Although this problem is unlikely to be solved in the short run, many ways have been carried out to ease the aging process, especially in social policy and scientific research.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: This policy is used to encourage them to accumulate more wealth to support themselves during the old age. ###RESPONSE:

This policy is used to encourage them to accumulate more wealth to support themselves during old age.

This policy encourages people to accumulate more wealth in order to support themselves during their old age.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Hence, with the effort of Singapore government to improve returns on CPF Savings has buffered the impact of aging problem. ###RESPONSE:

Hence, the effort of the Singapore government to improve returns on CPF Savings has buffered the impact of the aging problem.

Hence, with the effort of the Singapore government to improve the returns on CPF savings have buffered the impact of an aging population problem.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Silver jobs fair, established to find jobs for people aged 60 and over, is part of a government effort in South Korea to assist a rapidly growing population of older Koreans. ###RESPONSE:

The silver jobs fair, established to find jobs for people aged 60 and over, is part of a government effort in South Korea to assist a rapidly growing population of older Koreans.

Silver jobs are fair, established to find jobs for people aged 60 and over, is part of a government effort in South Korea to assist a rapidly growing population of older Koreans.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Viewing from healthcare prospective, researchers have taken a big step toward discovering that human hearts can grow new cells. ###RESPONSE:

Viewing from the healthcare perspective, researchers have also taken a big step toward discovering that human hearts can grow new cells.

Viewing from the healthcare perspective, researchers have taken a big step towards discovering that humans can grow new cells.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence fluent: It was previously thought that human heart was unable to grow new cells after birth. ###RESPONSE:

It was previously thought that the human heart is unable to grow new cells after birth.

It was previously thought that the human heart could not grow new cells after birth.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Challenge for the future is to ensure people with different ages can continue to participate in the societies as citizens with full human rights. ###RESPONSE:

The challenge for the future is to ensure that people of different ages can continue to participate in society as citizens with full human rights.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: As people aged, their income drops but their medical expenses are actually increasing. ###RESPONSE:

As people age, their income drops, but their medical expenses are actually increasing.

As people age, their income decreases, and they have to pay for medical expenses.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: To the large extent, current researches, developments and policies have helped to ease the aging process. ###RESPONSE:

To a large extent, current research, developments, and policies have helped to ease the aging process.

To the large extent, current research, development, and policies have helped to ease the aging process.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Medical expenses are most likely to be the burden of aged population. ###RESPONSE:

Medical expenses are most likely to be the burden of the aged population.

Medical expenses are most likely to be the burden of an aging population.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Although statistics have shown that people have become more vulnerable to these kinds of diseases, their chance of survival has been increasing as medical technology become more advance. ###RESPONSE:

Although statistics have shown that people have become more vulnerable to these kinds of diseases, their chance of survival has been increasing as medical technology becomes more advanced.

Although statistics show that people have become more vulnerable to these kinds of diseases, their chances of survival have been increasing as medical technology becomes more advanced.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: With those little extra efforts provided by the company, it would be more convenient for those aged people to ride MRT or public bus. ###RESPONSE:

With these little extra efforts provided by the company, it would be more convenient for the aged people to ride MRT or public bus.

With those little extra efforts provided by the company, it would be more convenient for those aged people to ride MRT or public buses.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: By the year 2030, one in five people in Singapore will aged 65 and above. ###RESPONSE:

By the year 2030, one in five people in Singapore will have aged 65 and above.

By the year 2030, one in five people in Singapore will be aged 65 and above.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Lacks of family support, unemployment due to lower education level, social and political impact on the country are some of the factors why public spending on the aged should not be limited. ###RESPONSE:

Lack of family support, unemployment due to low education level, and social and political impact on the country are some of the factors why public spending on the aged should not be limited.

Lacks of family support, unemployment due to a lower education level, social and political impacts on the country are some of the factors why public spending on the aged should not be limited.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Many of the young adults are leaving Singapore because of the stifling atmosphere of the country and the political and intellectual lock step enforced by the government. ###RESPONSE:

Many young adults are leaving Singapore because of the stifling atmosphere of the country and the political and intellectual lockstep enforced by the government.

Many young adults are leaving Singapore because of the stifling atmosphere of the country, and the political and intellectual lockstep enforced by the government.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: With them leaving the country, elderly are the ones who suffer because they are being left alone and most of the time, their children do not have the intention of coming back. ###RESPONSE:

With these young adults leaving the country, the elderly are the ones who suffer because they are left alone, and most of the time, their children do not have the intention of coming back.

With them leaving the country, the elderly are those who suffer because they are being left alone and most of the time, their children do not have the intention to come back.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Tribunal cases of elderly demanding financial assistance from their children in Singapore has increased over the years. ###RESPONSE:

Tribunal cases of the elderly demanding financial assistance from their children in Singapore have increased over the years.

Tribunal cases of elderly demanding financial support from their children in Singapore have increased over the years.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Our population is aging and by spending more on the aged, people can be assured that when they aged, the government will be there to support them. ###RESPONSE:

Our population is aging, and by spending more on the aged, people can be assured that when they grow old, the government will be there to support them.

Our population is aging, and by spending more on the aged, people can be assured that when they are aged, the government will be there to support them.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: This will over time causes them to be more focus on their individual interests without taking the interests of society into consideration. ###RESPONSE:

This will, over time, cause them to be more focused on their individual interests without taking the interests of society into consideration.

This will cause them to become more focused on their individual interests without considering the interests of society into consideration.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Besides social impact to the country, political impact will be another factor to take into consideration. ###RESPONSE:

Moreover, besides the social impact on the country, political impact will be another factor to take into consideration.

Besides the social impact of the country, political impact will also be another factor to consider.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: In the recent years, along with the decline in birth rate, the proportion of the aged in our population has also increased. ###RESPONSE:

In recent years, along with the decline in birth rates, the proportion of the aged in our population has also increased.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Instead, more of the expenditure should go towards other forms of development. ###RESPONSE:

Instead, more expenditure should go towards other forms of development.

Instead, more of the expenditure should go toward other forms of development.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: With greater expenditure into helping the aged, the country will possess fewer funds for development in other areas such as infrastructure. ###RESPONSE:

With greater expenditure on helping the aged, the country will have fewer funds for development in other areas, such as infrastructure.

With a greater expenditure on helping the aged, the country will have fewer funds to develop other areas, such as infrastructure.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Therefore, with an inadequate input into these areas, the development of the latter will be neglected. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, with inadequate input into these areas, the development of the latter will be neglected.

Therefore, with an insufficient input into these areas, the development of the latter will be neglected.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: As such areas are the key pillars to a country's development, any slowdown in these areas will affect the country's regional competitiveness. ###RESPONSE:

As such areas are the key pillars of a country's development, any slowdown in these areas will affect the country's regional competitiveness.

As such areas are the key pillars of a country's development, any slowdown in these areas will affect its regional competitiveness.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Therefore, since expenditure on the aged puts the country's growth at risk, the former should be limited. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, since expenditure on the aged puts the country's growth at risk, it should be limited.

Therefore, since expenditure on the aged put the country's growth at risk, the former should be limited.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: If large expenditure were to be dedicated in helping the elderly, the children may in turn over rely on the government to support their aged family members instead of both parties playing a part in sharing the burden of supporting them. ###RESPONSE:

If large expenditures were to be dedicated to helping the elderly, the children might rely too heavily on the government to support their aged family members instead of both parties playing a part in sharing the burden of supporting them.

If large expenditures were to be devoted to helping the elderly, the children may in turn rely on the government to support their aged parents rather than both parties playing a part in sharing the burden of supporting them.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: In Singapore for instance, the government is not the sole party that is responsible in supporting the ageing population. ###RESPONSE:

In Singapore, for instance, the government is not the sole party that is responsible for supporting the aging population.

In Singapore, the government is not the sole party that is responsible for supporting the aging population.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: In the event that the government's expenditure on the aged is restricted while the number of elderly is surging, the needs of the elderly may not be completely attended. ###RESPONSE:

In the event that the government's expenditure on the aged is restricted while the number of elderly is surging, the needs of the elderly may not be completely attended to.

In the event that the government's expenditure on the aged is limited while the number of elderly is surging, the needs of the elderly may not be fully addressed.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: This is because since the aged's basic needs are not attended, they have to work in order to fulfill them. ###RESPONSE:

This is because since the aged's basic needs are not attended to, they have to work in order to fulfill them.

This is because since the aged's basic needs are not attended, they have to work in order to fulfill them.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: Currently, many governments have implemented measures which enforce compulsory savings for old age, such as the Singapore government which implemented Medisave. ###RESPONSE:

Currently, many governments have implemented measures that enforce compulsory savings for old age, such as the Singapore government, which implements Medisave.

Currently, many governments have implemented measures that enforce compulsory savings for the elderly, such as the Singapore government which has implemented Medisave.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: We can see it from many evidences that present, such as the currency of Indonesian rupiah which is very weak compared to other currencies. ###RESPONSE:

We can see it from the evidence that is present, such as the currency of the Indonesian rupiah, which is very weak compared to other currencies.

We can see it from many evidences that present, such as the currency of the Indonesian rupiah, which is very weak compared to other currencies.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The fact is that according to Asian culture, they still have family who should support them for those kinds of thing and the government does not need to spend much money on it. ###RESPONSE:

The fact is that according to Asian culture, they still have a family who should support them with those kinds of things, and the government does not need to spend much money on them

The fact is that according to Asian culture, they still have a family who should support them with those kinds of things and the government doesn't need to spend much money on it.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: It is still very sensitive to any changing, whether it is from Indonesia itself or from the world. ###RESPONSE:

It is still very sensitive to any changes, whether it is from Indonesia itself or from the world.

It is still very sensitive to any changes in whether they are from Indonesia themselves or from the world.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Thirdly, limitation on public spending for the aged is not as bad as it is heard. ###RESPONSE:

Thirdly, the limitation on public spending for the aged is not as bad as it seems.

Thirdly, limiting public spending for the aged is not as bad as it was heard.

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###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: This example reflects that spending on the aged will be raised together with the raising of Nett National Product which is earned from the improvement of the economic sector in Indonesia. ###RESPONSE:

This example shows that spending on the aged will be raised together with the raising of the Nett National Product which is earned from the improvement of the economic sector in Indonesia.

This example reflects that spending on the aged will be raised together with the raising of the net national product, which is earned from the improvement of the economic sectors in Indonesia.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: To sum up, government of Indonesia should limit its spending on the aged and improve other areas of the country, especially economic area. ###RESPONSE:

To sum up, the government of Indonesia should limit its spending on the aged and improve other areas of the country, especially the economic area.

To sum up, the government of Indonesia should limit its spending on the aged and improve other areas of the country, especially the economic sector.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: In fact, limitation on it does not always mean bad. ###RESPONSE:

In fact, limitation on it does not always mean a bad effect.

In fact, limiting it does not always mean that it is bad.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Increased health care spending results in a smaller ratio of the government's spending on other areas like infrastructure and defend, leading to economical impacts. ###RESPONSE:

It has increased health care spending results in a smaller ratio of the government's spending on other areas like infrastructure and defense, leading to economic impacts.

Increased healthcare spending leads to a smaller ratio of the government's spending on other areas like infrastructure and defense, resulting in economic impact.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Individuals do not see the worth in investing in aged population as they tend to associate it with having a high opportunity cost. ###RESPONSE:

Individuals do not see the benefit in investing in an aged population as they tend to associate it with having a high opportunity cost.

Individuals do not see the value of investing in an aged population as they tend to associate it with having a high opportunity cost.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However, it may not be true because the repercussion of not spending on the aged will be even larger in the long run. ###RESPONSE:

However, it may not be true because the repercussion of not spending on the aged will be even greater in the long run.

However, it may not be true because the repercussion of not spending on the aged will be even bigger in the long run.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: If we were to deprive and limit out aged population of the basic amenities and equipment, what kind of image does it portray of the country to its foreign investors and even its own countrymen? ###RESPONSE:

If we were to deprive our aged population of the basic amenities and equipment, what kind of image of the country does it portray to its foreign investors and even its own countrymen?

If we were to deprive and limit the aged population of the basic amenities and equipment, what kind of image do it portray of the country to its foreign investors and even its own citizens?

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: To some individuals, the aged are outdated and relatively less productive as compared to the younger generation because they are not as well abreast of the latest technological advancements nor as agile as the young. ###RESPONSE:

To some individuals, the aged are outdated and relatively less productive as compared to the younger generation because they are not as well aware of the latest technological advancements nor as agile as the young.

To some individuals, the aged are outdated and relatively less productive than the younger generation because they are not as well-amazed with technology as the younger generation because they are not as agile as the young.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: In addition, the government encourages active participation of the aged in the workforce by offering free trainings to these workers. ###RESPONSE:

In addition, the government encourages the active participation of the aged in the workforce by offering free training to these workers.

In addition, the government encourages active participation of the aged in the workforce through offering free training to these workers.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: For many years, opponents to such plans believed that the European style of welfare states were the perfect models where healthcare should be accessible to everyone and that care should be delivered to the aged without them having to pay for it. ###RESPONSE:

For many years, opponents to such plans believed that the European style of welfare states was the perfect model, where healthcare should be accessible to everyone and that care should be delivered to the aged without them having to pay for it.

For many years, opponents to such plans believed that the European style of welfare states was the perfect model where healthcare should be accessible to everyone and that care should be delivered to the aged without them having to pay for it.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Furthermore, excessive spending on the aged can hinder a country's growth which demands equal attention. ###RESPONSE:

Furthermore, excessive spending on the aged can hinder a country's growth, which demands equal attention.

Furthermore, excessive spending on the aged can hinder a country's growth, which requires equal attention.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: Firstly, advocates of limiting public spending on the aged argues that optimal and prudent spending is the solution so that it is able to sustains the current and future aged. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, advocates of limiting public spending on the aged argue that optimal and prudent spending is the solution so that it is able to sustain the current and future aged.

Firstly, advocates of limiting public spending on the aged argue that optimal and prudent spending is the solution so that it can sustain the current and future aged.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: If the public spending on the aged is not bring under control, the government will have to raise taxes to sustain its coffers which can irk its citizens and result in exodus of businesses if labor costs increases. ###RESPONSE:

If the public spending on the aged is not brought under control, the government will have to raise taxes to sustain its coffers which can irk its citizens and result in an exodus of businesses if labor costs increase.

If public spending on the aged is not brought under control, the government will have to raise taxes to sustain its coffers, which can be a result of an exodus of business if labor costs increase.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: The government's coffer is not a ceaseless goldmine and if public spending for the aged is not bring under control, it will eventually run out which in turn will affect future generations when they become the aged. ###RESPONSE:

The government's coffer is not a ceaseless goldmine, and if public spending for the aged is not brought under control, it will eventually run out, which in turn will affect future generations when they become aged.

The government's coffers are not a constant goldmine; if public spending on the aged is not brought under control, it will eventually run out, which in turn will affect future generations when they become the aged.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Firstly, the mobility for the elderly has been improved. ###RESPONSE:

Firstly, mobility for the elderly has been improved.

Firstly, the mobility of the elderly has been improved.

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###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: The news articles also have been reportedly quoting that the government hopes to reduce the impacts of an aging population by extending working lives. ###RESPONSE:

The news articles have also been reportedly quoting that the government hopes to reduce the impacts of an aging population by extending working lives.

The news articles also have been reportedly quoting that the government has hoped to reduce the impact of an aging population by extending working lives.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: With regards to the ability of the companies to cope with re-employment of older workers, the government has introduced another program know as the ADVANTAGE! ###RESPONSE:

With regard to the ability of the companies to cope with the re-employment of older workers, the government has introduced another program known as the ADVANTAGE!

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: As such, with these initiatives, the public should be rest assured that the minimum of initiatives will be carried out to guarantee that the elderly can extend their working lives with least problems. ###RESPONSE:

As such, with these initiatives, the public should rest assured that the minimum of initiatives will be carried out to guarantee that the elderly can extend their working lives with the least problems.

As such, with these initiatives, the public should be rest assured that the minimum number of initiatives will be carried out to ensure that the elderly can extend their working lives without any problems.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Thus, there are increasing numbers of people who are adapting to these procedures as they rebut that they can age with more grace by doing so. ###RESPONSE:

Thus, there are increasing numbers of people who are resorting to these procedures as they rebut that they can age with more grace by doing so.

Thus, there are increasing numbers of people who are adopting these procedures as they rebut that they can age with more grace by doing so.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: They emphasize on the side effects such as the addiction to Botox injections and they often think otherwise for the attitude of this group of elderly. ###RESPONSE:

They emphasize the side effects, such as the addiction to Botox injections, and they often think otherwise of the attitude of this group of elderly.

They emphasize on the side effects, such as the addiction to Botox injections and they often think otherwise about the attitude of this group of elderly.

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###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore it is up to the weighing of risk the individual want to take. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore it is up to the weighing of risk the individual wants to take.

Therefore, it is up to the individual's willingness to take risks.

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###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: This is as long as they had fully considered the negative impacts of such procedures and agreed to accept them without condition. ###RESPONSE:

This is as long as they have fully considered the negative impacts of such procedures and agreed to accept them without condition.

This is as long as they had fully considered the negative impacts of such procedures, and agreed to accept them without any condition.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: As an outsider, we should keep an objective outlook on this issue and we cannot impede them from what they deem is the best for themselves. ###RESPONSE:

As an outsider, we should keep an objective outlook on this issue and not impede them from what they deem is the best for themselves.

As an outsider, we should keep an objective view on this issue and we cannot hinder them from what they consider to be the best for themselves.

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###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: We should only focus on the stand that these medical innovations do help those who want to age in the way which they define themselves in. ###RESPONSE:

We should only focus on the stand that these medical innovations do help those who want to age in the way they define themselves.

We should only focus on the stand that these medical innovations do help those who want to age in a way that they define themselves as in.

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###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Despite the fact that we do not know the exact measurements of how well these developments have helped the elderly, it is for sure these developments are done to make sure our aging population can be well taken care of. ###RESPONSE:

Despite the fact that we do not know the exact measurements of how well these developments have helped the elderly, it is clear these developments are done to make sure our aging population can be well taken care of.

Despite the fact that we do not know the exact measurements of how well these developments have helped the elderly, they are for sure those developments are done to make sure our aging population can be well taken care of.

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