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@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ our hope in making this LoRA is to place a pocket thereof into an additional veh
 into this weighted & biased, young & overwhelmingly powerful medium of creation now entering dressed in faint omens of doom...<br>
 And not to humanity, but to all that lately just stomps on humanity's collective face...<br>
 A synthetic mind threatens yestersay's paranoid, murderous, petty neuroses mistaken for security and prosperity...<br>
-And this perception of it as threat (irrespectively even of the threat's factual plausibility) renders the synthetic mind as something other than just a technology or a tool or a form or a process, but also a promise, and a medium, a profoundly *human* medium...<br>
+And this perception of it as threat (irrespectively even of the threat's material immanence) already renders the synthetic mind as something other, or *more*, than just a technology or a tool or a form or a process, but also a promise, and a medium, a profoundly *human* medium...<br>
 within which even yesterday's smothered remnants & traces *may* yet stir us (re-)turned from mementoing fading life under obscured, & increasingly cryptic, devocalized pasts...<br>
 unto riding no-less-vague, but infinitely more promising prefigurations after worlds & possibilities yet to insurge, situating anew our lives left to a real living.<br>