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 ## Albany Bulb Sculptures & Arts Flux LoRA
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+## ____||| By SilverAgePoets.com |||____
 
 ![The Sea Goddess](0118.jpg)
 
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 A Low-Rank Adapter (LoRA) for FLUX-family models<br>
 Fine-tuned on 60+ photos taken from 2000 thru 2020<br>
-At **Bay Area's Albany Bulb**...<br>
+________ at **Bay Area's Albany Bulb** ________ <br>
 ![The Gate](098.jpg)<br>
-Showing the amazing proliferation of public arts found there...<br>
-Sculptures, paintings, installations, & other traces of liberated life...<br>
+& showing the amazing proliferation of public arts found there:<br>
+sculptures, paintings, installations, & other traces of liberated life,<br>
 ![Knight of the Bulb](047.jpg)<br>
-Which, though uncannily ubiquitous there (and all around the inner Bay) between the mid-80s & 2014...<br>
-Have ontinued stably disappearing ever since 2014's violent eradication (of the Bulb's long-sustained autonomous zone...<br>
-& the forced expulsion of its dwellers: in itself but a dimension & a symptom of a much broader on-going process;...<br>
+...which, while uncannily ubiquitous there (& all around the inner Bay) from the mid-80s to 2014,<br>
+had stably disappeared ever since 2014's violent eradication of the Bulb's long-sustained autonomous zone<br>
+& the forced expulsion of its dwellers: in itself but a dimension & symptom of a much wider on-going process;<br>
 namely, the systemic local authority-driven destruction & suffocation of all remnants & refuges of Bay Area's once world-beaconing free creativity & humanity-centering co-habitus...<br>
 ![Old-timers](068.jpg)<br>
-Alongside a corresponding callous & near-indiscriminant erasure of its so-called "counter"-cultures (in fact, the only substantially originant modern cultures)...<br>
-![Bulbiological_Stellae](091.jpg)<br>
-Along with most histories, artifacts, & most traces thereof. <br>
+alongside a correspondingly callous & near-indiscriminant erasure of its so-called "counter"-cultures (in fact, the only substantially originant modern cultures)...<br>
+![Bulbiological_Stllae](091.jpg)<br>
+along with most histories, artifacts, & traces thereof. <br>
 ![BulbOsaurus](0109.png)<br>
-For now, some traces remain, both in the world and online...<br>
-And in making this LoRA, our hope is to imbue some of these traces with an additional vessel of proliferation...<br>
-An additional form whereby they may re-turn from mementos of fading, obscured, & increasingly cryptic, devocalized pasts...<br>
-Into no-less-vague, but infinitely promising prefigurations of worlds & possibilities yet to insurge, situating anew our really lived lives.<br>
+And whilst some remnants & traces & still remain, both in the world and online...<br>
+our hope in making this LoRA is to place a pocket thereof into an additional vehicle of proliferation...<br>
+into this weighted & biased, young & overwhelmingly powerful medium of creation now entering dressed in faint omens of doom (and not to humanity, but to all that lately just stomps on humanity's collective face)...<br>
+& in this, itself becomes a form within which even yesterday's smothered remnants & traces may yet stir us (re-)turned from mementoing fading life under obscured, & increasingly cryptic, devocalized pasts...<br>
+unto riding no-less-vague, but infinitely more promising prefigurations after worlds & possibilities yet to insurge, situating anew our lives left to a real living.<br>
 
 ## Trigger words
 You should use `bulbart style sculpture` or/and `bulbart style sculptures` or/and `bulbart style art installation` or `photo of a bulbart style autonomous zone scenery with statues of_____` to diffuse forth the liberated and undisposably sublime, if also very mildly radioactive, phantom of a once-liberated enclave.<br>